Here are some examples of Room One's descriptive writing. We were describing a friend in our class and using similes as well.

Caitlin’s clothes are like a flower. Her hair is like thorns. Her eyes are like glitter. The nail polish is like fishes fins. Her gumboots are like owls eyes. – Bailey P

Rydn has green farm clothes. He has brown chocolate hair and he has blue eyes like the lake. – Jack

Bailey’s hair is brown like a pony. Her eyes are green like green paint. Her skin is white like paper. Her clothes are soft like fluffy wool. – Rheana

Caitlin has blonde hair. It is shiny like the sun. Her face is like white flowers. She has pink strawberry cheeks. – Jessica

Jack’s hair is gold like treasure. His eyes look like the sea. Also Jack’s t-shirt is like black sky at night-time. I l also like Jack’s skin colour because the colour is pink like strawberry ice-cream. – Ngaru

John’s hair is like brown bark and his eyes are like green grass. – Justin

Eliza has beautiful black hair like the dark sky. Her tracksuit is beautiful purple like grapes. Her shoes are black and pretty. – Vision.

Jessica has a purple t-shirt with a chain. The chain is the colour of silver. Her eyes are hazel. Her chain on her t-shirt is like the sun. Her hair is so so shiny. Just like some money and her eyes are brown like the monkey bars. – Caitlin

Caitlin has blonde hair. It is shiny like money. She has a grey cardigan and a pink t-shirt like a big rose with words on it. Her skin is like the moon and the sun too. – Rydn.

Connor has blonde hair like a horse. He has beautiful green eyes and he has a colourful top like a rainbow. He has a jacket like a grey pony. Connor has on black pants and black socks like a tail. – Hannah