Friday, October 29, 2010

Hi Room 4. These are some of our Kiwi descriptions. Come and visit our class to see our lovely paintings of the Kiwi.

My Kiwi has got a yellow, sharp and curvy beak. Her feathers are hard, prickly and sharp. They are black, brown and red. She has little black marble eyes. Her feet are like hard crooked sticks.
By Bailee H


My Kiwi has a beak that is shiny and sharp like a sword. His feathers are soft and fluffy and are black and white. He has a body shaped like a lemon. His eyes are black like a marble.
By Connor



My Kiwi is round and fluffy like a bunch of hay. It has toenails like sharp needles and his feathers are sticking out from the inside. His beak is bendy and sharp like a knife.
By Rydn


My Kiwi is brown and black. His beak is the colour of mud and looks like a pointy, sharp sword. He has skinny, short legs and his eyes look like the dark night.
By Campbell


We have lots more Kiwi descriptions in Room 1, so come and check them out!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Room 1,
    I saw your kiwis yesterday...they are FANTASTIC!
    You have written great descriptions too, you are superstar writers.
    From Mrs Field

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